I'll set aside the image noise and lacking color depth, these are technical issues related to your wreck of a camera
Aside from the camera, your composition is very good, your light metering is spot-on and the whole feeling of the photo very lifelike.
I think that a carefully placed person in the photo would make it even better, but still, it is very good. I like it.
PS. Go get yourself a decent camera, you deserve it.
I truly appreciate receiving such comments by one of the greatest photographers I've seen around! I didn't expect that you would like it...I kinda thought that it is far too "commercial" for your taste!
Anyway...thanks a lot!
And I'd love to get a decent camera as a gift...my name day is on December